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MAC HealthSci 2012 Uni Supp App Options
cuteshorty73
#1041 Posted : Monday, May 07, 2012 9:46:30 PM
Rank: Frosh




Joined: 3/17/2012
Posts: 39
LJustin read my mind.

And now I feel like even more of a jackass because of how harsh I was in critiquing his supp app.

Sorry Justin. :(
McMaster University 2016
Bachelor of Health Sciences


Holla
LJustin
#1042 Posted : Monday, May 07, 2012 9:49:00 PM
Rank: Senior Student


Joined: 10/30/2011
Posts: 230
need2succeed wrote:
LJustin wrote:
need2succeed wrote:
I'm just going to post my first response for the time being... please do not quote it as I might decide to remove it.
I've tried omitting as many identity clues as possible haha but anyway, here it is:


The honest truth (in my opinion, please don't take this the wrong way): I think you had too many EC's in your essay. While it does show WHAT you do (and that you're really good at what you mention), I don't think it shows enough of WHO you are personality-wise. And with that said I'm not sure you completely answered the question.

Like cuteshorty73 said about my first response it leaves me wondering about who you are.

But I really liked your last bit with the name, it was a nice/strong way to conclude. And it's very well written. Like my English teacher would say you had really good diction.

PS: I agree with lesson1 that you seem like a fantastic person.

No, no, no, I appreciate your honesty. And I know, haha I like stuffed it with whatever I felt was really important. I just thought actions spoke louder than just words, so I included what I've been doing and I attempted a little humour (green tea, thumb-wrestling) but thank you for the feedback! :)


Haha, yup I caught some of that humour too. I really like green tea too, though I can't remember the last time I thumb-wrestled (maybe cuz I always lose :P).

And you're right, actions do speak louder than words. I guess the way you approached it just wasn't my cup of tea (lol @ terrible .. pun?).

Have you read my supp before? I've posted/deleted it 3 times before.

Best of luck, the wait is almost over. And what sucks is I don't have class on friday. Hello email + refresh button :D
LJustin
#1043 Posted : Monday, May 07, 2012 9:52:13 PM
Rank: Senior Student


Joined: 10/30/2011
Posts: 230
cuteshorty73 wrote:
LJustin read my mind.

And now I feel like even more of a jackass because of how harsh I was in critiquing his supp app.

Sorry Justin. :(

No no, no need to apologize. Being harsh is good. I'd rather you be harsh so I can learn and improve for the next time I may stumble upon something like this.

And besides, bad critiques tend to stick more than good ones (as you can evidently see) so next time I won't make the same mistake. :)
lesson1
#1044 Posted : Monday, May 07, 2012 9:52:31 PM
Rank: Frosh




Joined: 4/24/2011
Posts: 48
blehhh i really want to post my supp app but it's saved on another laptop that i don't have right now haha. i'll definitely post it next weekend if you guys will still be interested in giving me feedback by then.

especially if i get rejected, i'd like to know how i could have improved!

:( also, i didn't include ANY ec's or even hobbies or anything like that... oh well, the supp app ship has sailed :(.

and @need2succeed i kind of had a hunch you were a girl! woohoo girl power! i wonder what the gender breakdown of healthsci is! would any 1st years care to enlighten us?
McGill | Biological, Biomedical and Life Sciences
need2succeed
#1045 Posted : Monday, May 07, 2012 9:57:07 PM
Rank: Senior Student




Joined: 12/30/2010
Posts: 74
LJustin wrote:
need2succeed wrote:
No, no, no, I appreciate your honesty. And I know, haha I like stuffed it with whatever I felt was really important. I just thought actions spoke louder than just words, so I included what I've been doing and I attempted a little humour (green tea, thumb-wrestling) but thank you for the feedback! :)

Haha, yup I caught some of that humour too. I really like green tea too, though I can't remember the last time I thumb-wrestled (maybe cuz I always lose :P).

And you're right, actions do speak louder than words. I guess the way you approached it just wasn't my cup of tea (lol @ terrible .. pun?).

Have you read my supp before? I've posted/deleted it 3 times before.

LOL @ "cup of tea" hahahaha yeah, that was bad, but it was funny how bad that was lmao
I'll try finding and reading it sometime tonight -- just need to get back to AP biology XP last test of the year and the exam is on Monday... so unfocused :( OF ALL THE WEEKS IN THE YEAR, WHY THIS ONE.......
University of Western Ontario Class of 2016
Medical Sciences (BMSc - Honours) + Scholar's Electives + President's Scholarship


:D Successful year! Here are the details:
:D Applying to enter Fall 2012 with Top 6 Midterm 98.5
✔ [May 09] McMaster HealthSci
✔ [Mar. 01] Toronto EngSci
✔ [Feb. 21] Waterloo NanoEng
✔ [Feb. 20] McGill BioMed
✔ [Jan. 20] Western BioMed + [Apr. 21] Scholar's Electives <3
Euphenism1
#1046 Posted : Monday, May 07, 2012 10:00:54 PM
Rank: Senior Student




Joined: 4/24/2011
Posts: 108
need2succeed wrote:
Euphenism1 wrote:
@ need2suceed
You went on a Me-to-we trip too? I went on one too last summer! Where did you go?

I went to Kenya during March break with a school group. It was 2-weeks long so I missed a week of school but it was DEFS worth it. Where did you go?? :)


I went to Ecuador during July 2011 for three weeks and it was such a life-changing experience! I went in knowing no one and by the time I left...I truly thought of everyone there as family. The awesome mix of nightly leadership activities and volunteer opportunities working with the indigenous people was amazing! I still think about it all the time...
McMaster Health Science

Bleeding Blue with the Wolf Pack

Class of 2016
LJustin
#1047 Posted : Monday, May 07, 2012 10:01:08 PM
Rank: Senior Student


Joined: 10/30/2011
Posts: 230
need2succeed wrote:
LJustin wrote:
need2succeed wrote:
No, no, no, I appreciate your honesty. And I know, haha I like stuffed it with whatever I felt was really important. I just thought actions spoke louder than just words, so I included what I've been doing and I attempted a little humour (green tea, thumb-wrestling) but thank you for the feedback! :)

Haha, yup I caught some of that humour too. I really like green tea too, though I can't remember the last time I thumb-wrestled (maybe cuz I always lose :P).

And you're right, actions do speak louder than words. I guess the way you approached it just wasn't my cup of tea (lol @ terrible .. pun?).

Have you read my supp before? I've posted/deleted it 3 times before.

LOL @ "cup of tea" hahahaha yeah, that was bad, but it was funny how bad that was lmao
I'll try finding and reading it sometime tonight -- just need to get back to AP biology XP last test of the year and the exam is on Monday... so unfocused :( OF ALL THE WEEKS IN THE YEAR, WHY THIS ONE.......

I know right! It was so bad I was laughing while I was typing it. My sore attempt at humour.

Pretty sure you won't be able to find it (deleted it I think).

Ah, AP Bio. One of my favourite subjects. Did you write the National Bio Comp? I totally forgot about it so I did really bad. Good luck on your exam!

I find if I have trouble focusing I turn off the comp and lock myself in a room with no TV/ipod/Computer/any other gadget. Maybe it'll work for you.
aquarius
#1048 Posted : Monday, May 07, 2012 10:01:37 PM
Rank: Student Body Vice-President


Joined: 5/3/2011
Posts: 759
need2succeed wrote:
lesson1 wrote:
need2succeed wrote:
AND I JUST WROTE MY AP CHEM EXAM.
I HAVE NEVER BEEN SO UNFOCUSED.
This is terrible timing.
I FEEL YA. chem was so hard!!! :'( praying for a 4.

:( sigh -- what other APs are you writing?
Math is Wednesday :) by far, the one I'm looking forward to the most

ilikebones wrote:
all i remember was asians were at the bottom and black were at the top with white somewhere in the middle. i wouldn't call it racism, more like distribution since so little black people apply in the first place, lol

This is actually true. Of the 12 students from my school who applied to Yale, only my black friend got in. They were all smart and really qualified, but his application was the weakest by my judgement... I read their essays and everything and I swear I'm not racist or anything. Some of them were actually AMAZING... but they still got rejected. I wish I was black LOL


1000th post- that is a milestone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
aquarius
#1049 Posted : Monday, May 07, 2012 10:01:42 PM
Rank: Student Body Vice-President


Joined: 5/3/2011
Posts: 759
need2succeed wrote:
lesson1 wrote:
need2succeed wrote:
AND I JUST WROTE MY AP CHEM EXAM.
I HAVE NEVER BEEN SO UNFOCUSED.
This is terrible timing.
I FEEL YA. chem was so hard!!! :'( praying for a 4.

:( sigh -- what other APs are you writing?
Math is Wednesday :) by far, the one I'm looking forward to the most

ilikebones wrote:
all i remember was asians were at the bottom and black were at the top with white somewhere in the middle. i wouldn't call it racism, more like distribution since so little black people apply in the first place, lol

This is actually true. Of the 12 students from my school who applied to Yale, only my black friend got in. They were all smart and really qualified, but his application was the weakest by my judgement... I read their essays and everything and I swear I'm not racist or anything. Some of them were actually AMAZING... but they still got rejected. I wish I was black LOL


1000th post- that is a milestone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
cuteshorty73
#1050 Posted : Monday, May 07, 2012 10:01:50 PM
Rank: Frosh




Joined: 3/17/2012
Posts: 39
LJustin wrote:
cuteshorty73 wrote:
LJustin read my mind.

And now I feel like even more of a jackass because of how harsh I was in critiquing his supp app.

Sorry Justin. :(

No no, no need to apologize. Being harsh is good. I'd rather you be harsh so I can learn and improve for the next time I may stumble upon something like this.

And besides, bad critiques tend to stick more than good ones so next time I won't make the same mistake. :)


Awww. :)

I know I didn't mention this before, but I remember liking your third response a lot. It made me sad and it answered the question sufficiently! :)
McMaster University 2016
Bachelor of Health Sciences


Holla
Euphenism1
#1051 Posted : Monday, May 07, 2012 10:02:35 PM
Rank: Senior Student




Joined: 4/24/2011
Posts: 108
need2succeed wrote:
so unfocused :( OF ALL THE WEEKS IN THE YEAR, WHY THIS ONE.......


LOL STORY OF MY LIFE.
This is the month of IB exams and I have 9/10 papers left to write in the next 2 weeks.
FML.
McMaster Health Science

Bleeding Blue with the Wolf Pack

Class of 2016
anotherxnight
#1052 Posted : Monday, May 07, 2012 10:06:18 PM
Rank: Senior Student




Joined: 2/2/2011
Posts: 71
Ok. This is a bit odd, but how many of you guys are asian? :P I have heard rumours that Health Sci is like 90% asian. lol
uOttawa 2016
LJustin
#1053 Posted : Monday, May 07, 2012 10:07:32 PM
Rank: Senior Student


Joined: 10/30/2011
Posts: 230
anotherxnight wrote:
Ok. This is a bit odd, but how many of you guys are asian? :P I have heard rumours that Health Sci is like 90% asian. lol

Take a guess :P
lesson1
#1054 Posted : Monday, May 07, 2012 10:10:53 PM
Rank: Frosh




Joined: 4/24/2011
Posts: 48
LJustin wrote:

Ah, AP Bio. One of my favourite subjects. Did you write the National Bio Comp? I totally forgot about it so I did really bad. Good luck on your exam!



OI VEY THE COMPETITION WAS SO HARD HAHA. i never mastered the skill of knowing when to leave the question blank and when to guess, because they deduct a third of a point for every wrong answer. i ended up guessing for all the ones i didn't know... which in retrospect wasn't the smartest idea :'(

alsoo, some of the questions were so strange! what is the greatest threat to open ocean ecosystems...??? i was stuck between over-exploitation and pollution, i think i busted out the eenie meenie at that point.
McGill | Biological, Biomedical and Life Sciences
thekelvster
#1055 Posted : Monday, May 07, 2012 10:14:22 PM
Rank: Frosh


Joined: 4/8/2012
Posts: 38
RachDin wrote:
I feel like I'm seriously going to regret posting my responses but I'll put them up for a little bit anyway. It'll be nice to get some feed back from a third party after so long of not hearing anything. I think that is part of what is so difficult about the wait. Anywhooo...

I am defined by my love of learning, taking on challenges, and a deep desire to excel at what I do. Consequently, I have a fierce commitment to accomplish my goals. This leads me to plan and organize my time appropriately, as well as put in the work necessary to succeed. I gain the most from each experience by being immersed in the situation and devoting myself to the cause. I also have a strong commitment to helping others. For example, although I dedicate many hours to academics, I make the time to share my knowledge with elementary school students as a volunteer mentor with Big Brothers and Big Sisters of Halton. Witnessing each student's progress has made me proud to contribute to their academic and social success. My commitment as a mentor has also developed my patience and empathy.My resolve further applies to my hobbies. At the age of eight, I started playing the steel drum. Though I wasn't a natural, I practiced diligently and enhanced my musical skills. My hard work paid off and I became involved in performing and volunteering in The Caribbean Event, a charitable fundraiser that raises scholarship funds for deserving students who cannot afford post-secondary education. I am pleased that my commitment has allowed me to be a part of such a rewarding experience. My work ethic and dedication is apparent in all that I do. It has shaped me into the self motivated and enthusiastic individual that I am today and will continue to distinguish me in the future.


The word "hope" is simple, yet profound. Hope holds the unique ability to empower one with a resolve to survive through physical, emotional, and mental exhaustion. It can also lead one to develop the strength to persevere and strive for a better future. Hope is a word which has prevailed through generations and carried with it numerous connotations. A word that can be used to express optimism, ambition, aspiration, and faith should most definitely be preserved. Consider the words of Anne Frank. During a time of persecution she wrote, "Where there's hope, there's life. It fills us with fresh courage and makes us strong again". In the near future, I will also personally testify to how the presence of hope can make a difference. In February, I will embark on a mission trip with a group of students to the Dominican Republic to build a home for a poverty stricken family. This project, befittingly called H.O.P.E. (Health, Opportunity, Prosperity, Education), will offer vigor to a mountain community lacking basic necessities. While watching videos and stories of past H.O.P.E. trips, I have witnessed how optimism, despite many hindrances, was reflected by a constant smile on the children's faces. Hope illuminates even the most dismal situation. Although merely four letters, hope is a word of infinite possibilities and should be preserved for the longevity of mankind. A world without hope would be like a world without light - life would wither away.



Soccer has always been a major aspect of my life. It has helped to develop my character and problem-solving skills by challenging me to deal with difficult individuals. One teammate in particular was frustrating to deal with because she was a naturally talented soccer player but she did not demonstrate a dedication or commitment to the team. Although we played in a competitive rep. league, her lack of attendance and poor attitude hindered the team's dynamic and our overall performance. As the team captain, I felt that I could compensate for my teammate's lack of effort by trying to fill her role, however, this proved to be inadequate. My next steps were to motivate her and lead by example. I encouraged all of her efforts, challenged her to do better, and expected more of myself to show that I was personally making changes. She responded positively and our team's success improved as we became united. I also knew that my actions gained the respect of my team when they collectively nominated me as their MVP. Through this experience, I learned that to succeed as a team we must support each other - we all win and lose together. Camaraderie, above all else, makes each tribulation more rewarding, as every accomplishment is achieved with one another in mind. This experience has moulded me into a confident and dedicated leader who tries to inspire and bring out the best in others. I also learned to solve problems in an effective and uplifting manner.


I absolutely love yours! It's definitely my favourite so far... the perfect balance of straightforwardness and maturity. Just the way I like it! I would give you all sevens if it were up to me! To be honest, ours are pretty similar in content and organization, except I think yours is even better! Haha.

For me, I found the first question to be rather difficult to start. Did anyone else have this problem? The question was "In your opinion, what defines you as you?" Were they looking for a defining moment? A specific characteristic? Or were they looking at what ideas or goals inspire you? This question could be interpreted in so many different ways. Eventually, I chose an umbrella answer and used half examples and half logic to back it up. Hope it works!
Waterloo 2018
Honours Bachelor of Science (CAP 2012)
LJustin
#1056 Posted : Monday, May 07, 2012 10:15:03 PM
Rank: Senior Student


Joined: 10/30/2011
Posts: 230
lesson1 wrote:
LJustin wrote:

Ah, AP Bio. One of my favourite subjects. Did you write the National Bio Comp? I totally forgot about it so I did really bad. Good luck on your exam!



OI VEY THE COMPETITION WAS SO HARD HAHA. i never mastered the skill of knowing when to leave the question blank and when to guess, because they deduct a third of a point for every wrong answer. i ended up guessing for all the ones i didn't know... which in retrospect wasn't the smartest idea :'(

alsoo, some of the questions were so strange! what is the greatest threat to open ocean ecosystems...??? i was stuck between over-exploitation and pollution, i think i busted out the eenie meenie at that point.

I put Habitat Loss for that one ... :S

And yeah some were pretty strange. I ended up leaving quite a few blank. Couldn't eliminate enough choices to guess.
need2succeed
#1057 Posted : Monday, May 07, 2012 10:15:20 PM
Rank: Senior Student




Joined: 12/30/2010
Posts: 74
anotherxnight wrote:
Ok. This is a bit odd, but how many of you guys are asian? :P I have heard rumours that Health Sci is like 90% asian. lol

This is the soundtrack to my life, if it gives anything away:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N9qYF9DZPdw
BUT I CAN MAKE MYSELF LOOK BROWN IF I TAN REALLLLY HARD.
University of Western Ontario Class of 2016
Medical Sciences (BMSc - Honours) + Scholar's Electives + President's Scholarship


:D Successful year! Here are the details:
:D Applying to enter Fall 2012 with Top 6 Midterm 98.5
✔ [May 09] McMaster HealthSci
✔ [Mar. 01] Toronto EngSci
✔ [Feb. 21] Waterloo NanoEng
✔ [Feb. 20] McGill BioMed
✔ [Jan. 20] Western BioMed + [Apr. 21] Scholar's Electives <3
lesson1
#1058 Posted : Monday, May 07, 2012 10:26:31 PM
Rank: Frosh




Joined: 4/24/2011
Posts: 48
need2succeed wrote:
anotherxnight wrote:
Ok. This is a bit odd, but how many of you guys are asian? :P I have heard rumours that Health Sci is like 90% asian. lol

This is the soundtrack to my life, if it gives anything away:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N9qYF9DZPdw
BUT I CAN MAKE MYSELF LOOK BROWN IF I TAN REALLLLY HARD.


HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAAA i laughed SO HARD :'D
McGill | Biological, Biomedical and Life Sciences
thekelvster
#1059 Posted : Monday, May 07, 2012 10:26:37 PM
Rank: Frosh


Joined: 4/8/2012
Posts: 38
need2succeed wrote:
anotherxnight wrote:
Ok. This is a bit odd, but how many of you guys are asian? :P I have heard rumours that Health Sci is like 90% asian. lol

This is the soundtrack to my life, if it gives anything away:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N9qYF9DZPdw
BUT I CAN MAKE MYSELF LOOK BROWN IF I TAN REALLLLY HARD.


Lol. You're funny. I'd say nerds are the cutest type around, and I'm not saying this because I'm a nerd. :)

EDIT: Hey, I can make myself white if I bleach myself super hard, lol! And being Asian has perks too! For instance, when I go to China, I can suddenly camouflage with everyone else. Survival Secrets 101. Haha.
Waterloo 2018
Honours Bachelor of Science (CAP 2012)
RachDin
#1060 Posted : Monday, May 07, 2012 10:29:55 PM
Rank: Frosh


Joined: 8/2/2011
Posts: 26
@thekelvster

I appreciate the feedback! I'm glad I found that balance. I'm sure yours is good as well! I'd love to read it if you want to post it or PM :)
UTM Life Sciences I
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